Thank you! I really appreciate the in-depth criticism, and the fact that you listened to the WAVs too. I will definitely keep in mind the balance of the instruments more as I go along. I was a bit scared to create this because of the silly nature; I didn't want it to feel distasteful or anything to others, so it is nice to hear my description clears it up as well!
Also, the dogsong synth is a damn daniel "AR" vocal chop! But it does have a similar degree of silliness to it haha