Oh, I've actually gotten quite far already and I must admit, you were right, the translation became dramatically better, good job! I'm genuinely impressed at your growth, it couldn't have been easy!
I am so happy I can now judge the writing in good faith without feeling like I'm punching down. Though I'll wait till the story is over, of course.
Anyway, thank you for the chat and I wish you luck with your project, I can see now you're doing your best and don't need any more of my nagging.