What a journey ! Love what you did, track really feels like you're telling a story, lots of surprise.
I especially like the differents rythmic ideas you mixed together, had a kind of a "tribal" vibe, wich is really nice and fits well the theme !
My favorite parts are the intro, the humming is nice and deep, evokes well those monks you wanted. And also the part that starts at 3:00, very energic and frenetic !
The high pitched voice might be a bit over used to my personnal taste, but there's a real effort to keep it variated and interesting through the all piece, so good job !
Very well done !