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What a journey ! This track is so dense, but well executed !

I personnaly don't know anything about EDM, but you kept me surprise all along, transitions are nicely done, and there's a lot of good idead ! Mix and sound are very good too !

Really well done, that's a very unique track !

Such an interesting track ! Very modern in it's approach, lots if ideas well executed 

I loved the triumphant theme that starts at 1:55 !

Congrats on the orchestration too, using only brass, you stil manage to create a lot of different textures

There's a very ominous vibe to it, definitely breaks a lot of rules, but in a very coherent manner

Well done, very original ! 

Very well done, I love this track ! 

Emotional vibes, a solid choice of harmonies, and the arrangement is very nice too ! The break at 3:00 and what followed made me somewhat think to Pink Floyd a little, it's very nice ! This music really tells a story, good work

If I could give a little feedback on the piano and the melodic aspect, it would be this : first of all, for a non piano player, you did a wonderfull job ! 

Left hands chords are well chosen, if you wanted you could arpegiate them more, to make to piano more present, but that's more an artistic choice

As for the melody, my feeling is that it somewhat lacks a bit of a direction, and is a bit to "locked up" in a tiny space. Don't hesitate to stretch its tessitura, and make use of greater intervals. One thing that's really cool is the use of a leitmotiv (G, Bb, A, G), nice work on that part !

Nice submission, congrats ! 

I can tell you have a lot of ideas, and for a first attempt you should be proud ! 

I got a little cartoonish vibe, it really feels you want to tell a story through your music.

Drum parts are a bit loud in the mix to my taste, and I would have loved hearing the melodies more developped, as your tracks are a bit short. But very pleasing to listen to nonetheless !

There's some great things here, congrats, and keep it up ! 

I really love this ! 

There's a feeling of peace and serenity that I really like, a very solid work on the mixing and sound, it's much pleasing to listen to

Love the harmonics choices as well, beautiful colours ! And the silence at 0:53, followed by the entry of the piano is great, made me truely feel emotions. 

Congrats, it's a very beautifull track ! 

Nice textures and mood, very meditative ! 

Well done !

Actually made me laugh, this is such crazy music ! 

Definitely breaks the rules, good job, you surprised me all along :D

I love this track. It's very well written, great ideas and well executed ! It really tells a story, and fits so well with the theme

Special mention to the epic theme at 1:10, love that part 

Very good job, congrats ! 

Nice textures, definitely creates a loud atmosphere !

Good job !

Very cool, I love the build up and the mood, really felt the track evolving

Fits also very well with the theme !

Ending was a bit abrupt, but other than that it's very beautifull piece of music, well done !

That's such a nice comment,  thank you so much ! 

Very cool, I think your track evokes well the lonely and meditative mood of the mountains !

Sound is very clean, super enjoyable to listen to. Very nostalgic and intimist, well done, really !

Very nice and beautifull track ! Got some Celeste vibes to it :D

I love the emotions that comes out out this, I had feelings of hope and nostalgia throught the piece. Cool melodic ideas, and well done on the modulations at 1:00, as chords go up a tone (I think) it really feels like ascending.

Nice piano sound as well ! 

Very well done !

Very interesting, definitely breaks the rules !

Got a bit lost as there's so much dissonances, but it creates a kinda crazy mood, it would fit well for a frenetic bossfight :D

good job !

Yeah I want to learn sound design at some point, I think you're right it could be a nice addition to bring some depth on some tracks !

But for now I'm kinda lost in all the technical stuff, so I'm keeping it simple and "acoustic" for now :D

Thanks for taking the time and for the feedback 🙏

Thanks a lot ! Maybe next time I'll have the time to orchestrate :D

Your submission is very cool too, nice job, and thanks for taking the time to listen and comment 🙏

Thanks for the nice feedback, very glad you liked it !

Good job ! 

Very good quality in the mix and sound design, with enough variations and ideas to make it interesting through all the piece 

I especially liked the half time change at 2:56, makes the groove so heavy, was a nice surprise :D

Congrats !

So cool ! 

Huge congrats on the rulebreaking part of it, it's very well executed ! I love how you switch styles, it kept my attention through all the piece, waiting for the next surprise :D

I love how "chaotic" it starts, to end in a more chill vibe, that was a nice journey listening to your tune !

Great job !

This is a very cool track, what a chill vibe ! 

At first I had some Outer wilds vibe, probably the guitar and whistle :D But you really created an atmophere here, this calm groove evokes well the nature , and is very pleasing to listen to

Special mention to the ending chords, very cool changes to finish the piece, surprised me in a very good way :D

Nicely done !

Really cool track ! I love how the differents ideas are mixed together, with this solid groove to support it. The harmonies gave me some nostalgic vibe, and are well chosen.

My favorite part starts at 1:09, the arpeggiator is a very nice addition ! And very good job on the sound design part, the explosion adds a punctuation through the piece and some depth, love it ! 

Very well done ! 

Thanks youuuu 🙏

Thanks a lot 🙏

What a chill vibe, I love it ! 

The guitar phrases are nice, especially like the little riff at 0:27, fits well in your groove ! Maybe the guitar could have been a bit more in front of the mix to enjoy it even more :D

Anyway, good job on the track ! 

What a journey ! Love what you did, track really feels like you're telling a story, lots of surprise. 

I especially like the differents rythmic ideas you mixed together, had a kind of a "tribal" vibe, wich is really nice and fits well the theme ! 

My favorite parts are the intro, the humming is nice and deep, evokes well those monks you wanted. And also the part that starts at 3:00, very energic and frenetic ! 

The high pitched voice might be a bit over used to my personnal taste, but there's a real effort to keep it variated and interesting through the all piece, so good job !

Very well done ! 

Interesting vibe, very ominous and dark mood.

Creates a sense of danger and emergency with the added groove, fits very well the "Break the rules" theme imo ! 

Congrats !

Nice effort for the theme you followed, the change of key is surprising but it works well in this style imo

I don't know much about trap music so it's hard for me, but I think the drum part is nice and groovy. Maybe some more variations and little melodic lines on top would be nice, but maybe that's just me !

Anyway, nice job ! 

This is SICK ! 

I really love what you did, Pixel Shot reminded me a lot of the Crypt of the Necrodancer OST,  nice groove and energy. Very nice mix and quality also. 

Father to Son is also very cool, creates a sweet relaxed mood, it would fit very well as an chill exploration theme imo ! 

Only thing is I don't quite see  the theme "Break the rules", I was guessing it might be the more silent section at 1:00 (In Pixel Shot) ? 

And for the GeoMusic I think the second track would work well to evoke some icy caves, don't if that's what you wanted :D

Anyway, those tracks are really well written and produced, well done, you should be proud !

Still working everyday, got so much to learn on the technical side especially ! Thanks for the nice comments <3

Thank you 🙏

Thanks, glad you liked it :D 

I was thinking of a small chamber formation maybe, but in the end it's nice piano solo. Wanted maybe to give the lead to a cello, but my VST was so awfull I kept it this way haha

Thanks for the feedback !

Thanks you mate ! As I said in the comment below, I recorded my playing with my digital piano, using Pianoteq 8 as a VST. Had to quantize some passages due to a lack of time to practice the piece, so some passage sounds too robotic unfortunately. 

Thanks for taking the time and feedback !

Thank you so much, i'm glad you like it 🙏

As for the track recording, I plug my digital piano on Ableton and record the piece with metronom. Due to lack of time, I had to quantize some passages, and honestly I've overdone it, as some passages sound to "robotic" to my taste. But yeah for the most part, it's me playing ! The VST I used for the piano sound is Pianoteq 8, the New York Steinway one.

Again, thanks for taking the time to listen, means a lot <3

Thanks :D

Thanks a lot for the nice feedback, and for taking the time <3

thank you so much <3

Thanks a lot mate, glad you liked it ! 

Indeed now that mention it I hear it too, really not sure what caused it... might be an export glitch, my PC is kinda old xD Thanks for bringing it to my attention !

No worries, I often have the same problems on the mixing part, hard to decide when you've listened to your own track so many times xD It doesn't take away the beauty of your track though :D

What a journey ! Very nice job on the sound design you made, sounds very original and really tells a story. Love the piano part in "waves", adds a nice cute touch. Good job !

Love it ! What a peacefull feeling, choice of instruments is great, really evokes the sea. Nice harmonies and melodic ideas, well written, good job ! Hope this little clam will reach it's destination :D I had a very nice time listening to your track, congrats !