I absolutely adored this. You had me at short story adaption, those are far and few in between in horror gaming (even though the genre lends itself to it) but the ones I know are also great.
You have such a great sense for the whole drama and storyboard. The visuals are great, the switch of perspectives, the small little walking segments, the dialog - it was all a big delight, I had so much fun, there were so many neat little surprises in the story and how you told it. Gorgeous.