there's some cool ideas here, i like the narration and the main mechanic with the ink. i also like the idea that there isn't combat, unless there is but there's no sort of information about controls on either the page or in the game that i could find so i'm not sure. i like the art for the character, going for the ink brush look to it which i think is cool and fits the theme. there's a lot of blind falls and a single hit from the enemies sending you back is strange since it encourages you to cheese them by just jumping over and over and also defeats the purpose of having a health bar. it's also very easy to lock yourself in the room where you get the ink. the ink being on a recharge after you land might work better than the refills. i really like the idea though, i think you could pull a lot of cool mechanics from the theming so it would be a cool one to continue!