Very well done, I love this track !
Emotional vibes, a solid choice of harmonies, and the arrangement is very nice too ! The break at 3:00 and what followed made me somewhat think to Pink Floyd a little, it's very nice ! This music really tells a story, good work
If I could give a little feedback on the piano and the melodic aspect, it would be this : first of all, for a non piano player, you did a wonderfull job !
Left hands chords are well chosen, if you wanted you could arpegiate them more, to make to piano more present, but that's more an artistic choice
As for the melody, my feeling is that it somewhat lacks a bit of a direction, and is a bit to "locked up" in a tiny space. Don't hesitate to stretch its tessitura, and make use of greater intervals. One thing that's really cool is the use of a leitmotiv (G, Bb, A, G), nice work on that part !
Nice submission, congrats !