I don't have much to say about this one, but I enjoyed! I thought the writing in particular was really solid, even if not a whole lot has happened yet I'm definitely curious for more.
I loved the edited BGs, I thought they perfectly fit the mood. The rest of the art was good, but there was a bit of a confusing contrast between the almost overly detailed sprites and the much more simple CGs.
While I enjoyed the piece, the overall tone was slightly confusing as well. The narration was very artsy and moody, but it was occasionally interrupted by some choices that felt straight out of a comedic anime. The two biggest culprit is the big fujoshi mission statement (accompanied by boss music) followed by the hilariously cartoony logo. I can't say I hated that part, but considering that in the current version that functionally is the current climax of the story, it being so disconnected from what happened before doesn't feel right. I guess it could work well when this is just a small part of a much bigger story.