I must admit I was not in love with the writing style, it felt like a pretty uneven package. We go from sessions where the narration is entirely short sentences to sections where the narration is so dense and abstract that it makes me start to zone out. We can from very literary language to characters being described as "cute". I feel like this would benefit from an editorial pass.
The presentation was otherwise immaculate though. The backgrounds perfectly communicate a sense of loneliness and isolation and the simple understated sound design perfectly highlights the key moments and functions as a narrative tool as well. For example, every choice being accompanied by a sound bite serves to hint at the significance of "choosing" even before the story addresses that point.
Above all though, I loved the story, and it is one that will stay with me long after I finished reading it. **Slight spoilers** I guess, but I couldn't really help but frame the whole story as the struggle of homosexuality vs Abrahamic religions.
The end sequence was incredible.