Heyya Thanks sm for the review! 
Will do more on the story later! I was going to add a 1 comic page intro before the game start but oh well, didn't have much time left. For sure I'll make this kind of game in different engine later on, since I just realized I'm into a mechanic-gameplay game rather than vn-style gameplay (I love to make a lot of story but didn't have the capability to do em into words xD)
I really wish I can do more on this really early but welp. I've noted all of your points, Thanks for the review again! Your honest review is what I needed the most.