This was a pretty good vn! The all lower case text is so cool and evocative
You made some decisions that I don't really like in visual novels, such as having non-choices (like how I can answer "yes / maybe / a few" questions), and during the pick an item section, I was unsure what the point of picking something is, when we won't even use it and it gets overridden by a choice we couldn't make
But, those "pick an item" sections initially appeared as a collag, and the perspective shift to 3d was so cool
I also really liked the dynamic between lilith and eve, and the implied violence and gore that's going on :3