Both SkyShard stories I've read dance so beautifully on the knife's edge of reality. It captivates me every time. You'll Never Catch Me Leaving is poetry. If you've read it, that is obvious. As the protagonist runs, it carries you along with it. As a writer I am so often drawn to second person as a means to grant agency to a player when they make choices. You'll Never Catch Me uses second person to speak directly to you at the same time it is speaking to the subject, and I cannot adequately describe how truly spoken to it makes me feel. Folks, I think, have already lauded how punchy the tagline and the lines around it are, but goddamn I have never described a jam VN as "quotable" until I read YNCML. Sorry, I gush.