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Hi! This was a wonderful read and I can't wait to see what comes next. I love how much the narration is influenced by the Oracle's POV - the constant doubting, spiraling and self-loathing that bubbles up at the slightest trigger. Vez and Ash are so sweet and so genuine and yet my Oracle can't stop questioning their intentions, self-sabotaging, drawing themselves away for fear of hurt, that their touch will burn. I like POVs like this one and I love how it affects the relationships therein and I love how you've written it.

Kudos and best of luck with your further plans! <3

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Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your thoughts!! 🥹💛 The Oracle is slightly paranoid, so I'm glad that it reads properly. They'll eventually gather the courage to hold on to someone.