I was shocked at how big the document was, and it appears that many of the universes contain a lot of duplicate changes with differences that are very hard to differentiate.
I think the universes would’ve benefited from base mad-libs that are filled in via roll tables to help reduce the size of the document.
The overlapping text is stylistically interesting but difficult to read. This is very pronounced on the second page. It might’ve been possible to achieve the desired effect by limiting yourself to maybe 3 offset colours.
There’s some very cool ideas in here though the way the information is presented could result in a lot of page flipping. Static and Echoes made me think of aspects from Gradient Descent.