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This looks like a very neat, infinitely re-playable trifold. Design is super simple and clean.

I was a little bit confused about what the dice on the rooms on page two meant as they weren’t consistent (i.e. Office of the Future vs. C-Suite). My interpretation is that’s how many of each die type you need to roll (X negative space dice + Y room dice).

I was a bit confused about PARITY BITS as they weren’t explained up front the way TOKENS are. Though I did find where they were sorta hidden using the search function. I wonder if perhaps TOKENS and PARITY BITS could be rolled up into the same resource or if that would be too punishing. The idea of balancing keeping Daemons happy vs avoiding data loss could be interesting.

I definitely missed a few important sentences in my quest to make everything fit into the pamphlet. You interpreted the floor dice correctly! And I should have the extra resources introduced and explained before I describe how they can ruin FIST's day. Two resources might be too many - I'll consider if they need to get trimmed down. I could simply have checkpoints between floors demand TOKENS, or something similar.

Most of my focus went into the layout, so I'm glad it's clean!