I'm assuming that you're new to game developing. There are several things that could use improvement from creating events to writing stories. I also recommend making your own assets. There are also a few spelling mistakes and bugs here and there. As someone who also uses RPG maker, you have a long way to go, just like me. But if this is your first game or one of your first games, it is pretty creative and ambitious. It certainly is an interesting story. Welcome to game developing.