The composition and mix is a lot better than you think probably. I think you'd be okay making things a little louder and the bass can be booming since it'll help convey that sense of vastness you're going for. The composition is honestly great though! All the parts work really well together and I love all the layers! Awesome work!
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Glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback! I was afraid of making things too muddy and overwhelming with how many instruments are playing, so I went with the safe choice of lowering things down haha. Technically I could EQ to balance them, but this is the part where I don't have enough experience and having some trouble with.