I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (2):
I gave this a two at the time for “expanding friendship” but now that I’ve had more time to think about it, I would give it a one since it was such an easy was out.
Story (2):
As someone that reads a lot of Slice-Of-Life, I wasn’t that bogged down by all of the small talk. I do think there should have been more friction between the MC and the tsundere MY WOLF to make the story feel more satisfying. When Callum talks about his video game, I think I found is more entertaining than most people because of all of the connections I was making to Fire Emblem.
Presentation (2):
After our lesson about Creative-Commons/Royalty-Free, I do think that a lot of the choices you made in terms of that were appropriate. I was surprised by the ending CG considering that the only piece on Non-Pre-Sprite art that was used for promotional purposes is the thumbnail.
Creativity (1):
There’s no much I can really say for creativity. The unique species that you chose for the MC was surprising considering even I never heard of it before. There has to be an alternative universe somewhere where my Fursona is part that instead of a Greater Grison. The second to last in this category can unfortunately be easily felt.
Total (7):
I hope that Beginning Anew With You is not the end of your career because that would be an ironic tragedy. I’ve been saving this line in my mind for months.