I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (1):
This is one of the few VN’s that I couldn’t figure out how the theme was implemented nor could anyone in my stream do so either.
Story (2):
I think a lot of this VN is carried by the surprisingly compitent writing despite how short it is.
Presentation (1):
I can understand that if this was your first project and everything but just having Vincent be slightly transparent and floating a bit in place would have gone a long way. I think a lot of people passed on this submission because of the lack of screenshot. Just having the safe password part as a screenshot would have made people more interested in the submission.
Creativity (3):
I think I did give it one point for being one of the few M/F Submissions this year. The set up for the story was unique. I did like the safe password part but I still have no idea how we’re supposed to guess the numbers without going into the code and being all hackerman.
Total (7):
This is the lowest total ranked Submission, that has not been made private, to have a 3 in one category. I could have seen this becoming one of those interactive investigation VN’s that are popping up more and more.