I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (5):
The first 5/5! I knew when you joined the Jam, you were either going to do a Vore VN, a TF VN or both. You knew what you audience expected, delivered and it paid off. No one can argue with an a MY WOLF who expands like Nico.
Story (2):
The VN has a beginning but no middle or end. Like there’s no struggle. There’s no resolution. There’s just TF and slight explanation for it.
I don’t read a lot of TF stories but I feel like this might be commonplace. Why try in un-TF-ing if TF-ing is good? Like the end could have been the MC and the MY WOLF trying to figure out how to best use his new body to benefit society? I don’t know. Maybe that’s an overused plot point in these types of stories.
Presentation (2):
The use of the 3D backgrounds was quaint. Reminds me of something that I would do. The penis peek was peak.
Creativity (1):
I don’t remember why I gave this such a low rank. I think I needed to balance out the 5 for theme somehow. It having 29 places between Theme and Creativity makes it seem like other people had the dilemma as me.
Total (10):
This is one of the few VN’s where I heard it was NSFW but was disappointed that we didn’t get to impale ourselves on some physics defying wolf-cock.
I was hoping that would be an update where you added JMJerBear’s art to the end.
It’s weird that your VN’s are becoming less NSFW as you publish more, lol.
I’m okay with vore along as it’s consensual and has clear respawn when needed! You don’t need to hold back anymore!