Guys this game is way beyond a 3 days gamejam! You nailed it!
The problems I found are very small stuff, like the music not looping or the tutorial, but they are all details that in a 3 days gamejam happens to everyone. I didn't enjoy waiting for the mixing etc. maybe have less time to serve the clients but with a more fast paced gameplay? Or even just look at the recipes while waiting. But that might be a me problem being impatient
I love the characters and the art so much, there are a lot of different cocktails to prepare and i think that even in a longer game would be enjoyable to remember them and be always more efficent and faster.
The story is very well written considering the length.
For my experience VN have an hard time creating fun minigames, but this one is a really good interpretation of the "prepare and serve" subgenre.
I hope you'll be able to continue this project, i'm very curious about kayori, fox and imp lifes, what they do, what happened to them. And aboutthe dog uprising too!
Either way, i'll keep an eye on your next projects, very talented.