I AM RATING THESE ALL THESE JAM SUBMISSIONS RELATIVE TO ONE ANOTHER. THERE ARE HIGH HIGHS AND LOW LOWS BUT PLEASE DON’T TAKE THIS TOO PERSONALLY, AFTERALL, WE ALL ONLY HAD A MONTH.
Implementation of Theme (4):
I thought that expanding spores and fungus was a super unconventional use of the theme. As someone who loves mushrooms and thinks they are poggers, there’s nothing more satisfying than watching a timelapse of a mushroom spreading its spores into the air.
Now imagine that beauty but it is a Lesbian trying to save another Lesbian from dying.
Story (2):
This could have used more time to be worked in the story department but I understand that you were committing yourself to three projects this month. Not everyone can pull a JMJerBear. There should have been more build up to the MC leaving or more falling action to the MC being saved and living with Queen for the rest of her life.
Presentation (2):
The custom CG was nice along with making another clothing option for The Bunny. The choice to add an NSFW Toggle was a bit odd considering how little NSFW content there was but is still very respectable. I’m glad to see that you didn’t continue to do side facing sprites like you did in The Package Day.
Creativity (5):
I had to give the first F/F MY WOLF 5 stars. Being the first F/F in a mostly M/M world is very brave.
Total (13):
It was a big step in quality from The Package Day and then Losing Importance was an even bigger step from this. I’m glad that you learned not to spread yourself too thin in NovemBEAR. MAY WOLF 2024, would have been waaay different without you.
Will you spread lesbianism in the future like The Queen’s Spores?
BTW, you still need to fix the thumbnail for this.