First, yes its sounding "MIDI" but I don't think that can stop you, there is ALOT of amazing free plugins out there you can grab and make something more realistic.
There is alot of variety which is the best bits of the whole album, everything is cohesive yet still feel different not like the same song which I like.
For Bard or Balatro : The flute melody, it needs to breath cause the flute player is dead unless it knows circular breathing or you have two flute but a flute player would love to have more time to breathe, I so you can add some silence in the melody I think it will also help the track to breathe a bit.
A loyal soldier, most of the mix is in mid and low mid range so you need to add some highs to balance everything and get the mud since playing low chords is not the prettiest.
Whispering wind and Meeting the mountaing king has the same issues, too much in low-mid, need some balance, adding something to make it bit more clear.
Might seem a brutal comment but since its unranked I went all in to give my opinion, so don't be offended it seems alot but its a nice track overall.