Alllllllll right. Lets start with the classic obvious. Its very loud XD. Tone it down a bit.
First track : I can sense that with good musical theory I think you could do something nice knowing what works well in a melodic context and now it just seems like you tried a bunch of melodic patterns that does not work with whats happening. The low guitar on the left ear is a bit too much, add something similar on right ear at some point to help us a little bit. But nice texture build up.
AFR Form : Good kick in the mix again same issue with the melodic aspect of the track.
Formed glass : I like the rythmic pattern, well actually most of your rythmic feel on your tracks are pretty well done.
Metal Half : the coolest track so far cool arrangement, this is a proof that you can make something without real melodic or big harmonic direction, only textures keep it simple.
I still think you can probably create something cool with the basic texture play you have if you get on into some real harmonic and melodic structures.
Might seem a brutal comment but since its unranked I went all in to give my opinion, so don't be offended it seems alot but its a nice album overall.