You know, you make things in the genre/style that in general I probably dislike the most.

But SOMEHOW you consistently make me enjoy that xD

I don't know how are you doing this, but I guess it counts as a praise.

My fav is probably Metal Half - I like how dark and heavy it gets, would match some Code Vein style boss battle perfectly. But hell, AFR Form, after 3:00 when you introduce that phat synth: Melodically it somehow gives me the Cabaret vibes (Cancan dancing robots or something xD), it's great, I love it.

Definitely a fun track, chill and ambient.

Nicely done!

Alllllllll right. Lets start with the classic obvious. Its very loud XD. Tone it down a bit. 

First track : I can sense that with good musical theory I think you could do something nice knowing what works well in a melodic context and now it just seems like you tried a bunch of melodic patterns that does not work with whats happening. The low guitar on the left ear is a bit too much, add something similar on right ear at some point to help us a little bit. But nice texture build up.

AFR Form : Good kick in the mix again same issue with the melodic aspect of the track.

Formed glass : I like the rythmic pattern, well actually most of your rythmic feel on your tracks are pretty well done.

Metal Half : the coolest track so far cool arrangement, this is a proof that you can make something without real melodic or big harmonic direction, only textures keep it simple.

I still think you can probably create something cool with the basic texture play you have if you get on  into some real harmonic and melodic structures.

Might seem a brutal comment but since its unranked I went all in to give my opinion, so don't be offended it seems alot but its a nice album overall.

Really liked the first track, very haunting atmosphere and yet it has a solid groove.  AFR Form and Metal Half makes me imagine going inside a haunted robot factory!

Well, i guess you achieved your goal of doing something crazy in a short time haha! Great work!

When compared to your last Impressions submission, I hear you experimenting more with sound design and rhythm.  I dig this direction.  Your composition style has this  sort of "stream of consciousness" feel.  It sounds like rhythm and texture are forming the songs more than functional chord progressions, a compositional style that I really like.  "Intro to the Form" is probably my favorite for the industrial sounds and that gritty low end doom/sludge distorted bass sample - so tasty!!!  Some instruments still sound a little loud in the mix, like the synth at 1:10 in "Formed Glass".

I really liked Formed Glass, the percussion in that is just really interesting and I could totally see a game in some kind of industrial, mechanical, or robotic setting that would love this kind of sound. Super cool and creative submission! 

cool👍