Another tiny misspell is when Latios is just about to get her massage in the sentence "your fingers gig into her shoulders and she steely demeanor melts like butter" the she before steely demeanor can be changed to "her steely demeanor melts" to make more sense.
Also in the AWC meeting "Uxie and Azelf are a little more retrained" the retrained can be "restrained".
Another in same event of AWC meeting is "Cresslia practically skips to the from of the room" the from can be "front" of the room. When she is chosen.