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How are you doing Chainsaw?

I just realized that Meloetta is the first legend so far to wear clothes (her black dress) so when she gets on the boat she will be the only legend so far to not be naked at all times. 

It would be funny if Meloetta asks the MC to take her clothes shopping and lets him help her choose the new clothes but they end up making a big mess in the changing room for obvious reasons. I know this is likely not to go in but I just wanted to put this out since it would be funny.

Had a possible idea if chainsaw feels that they wont be able to work on this and have to end the game sooner that the MC has a possibility of still getting all the legends in the series. It would be that as the MC is going back to Maples lab to finish the journey he get intercepted by the rest of the legends for some reason. This would only happen if the MC has collected ALL the legends so far including subs and mythical and met with all the women so far as well. 

An example would be just after completing Gen 6 and the MC is going back. Gen 7 would have been the place to meet Team Rainbow so instead they intercept his boat to get his legends if he so far has all other legends from Gen 1-6. So Team Rainbow would have captured all the legends of Gen 7,8 and 9 since they would know there locations from other dimensions. They would have a mind control machine to control the legends and the MC would need to destroy it to free them. On his last attack on the machine it somehow sends his charm ability effect to the legends before being destroyed. This would not force the legends to like him but the legends have already heard about him a lot and looked forward to meeting him to judge if the want to join him but got beaten by team rainbow and brought along to him and are now free so they join him.

If Chainsaw is able to keep working on the game and does not use this then that would be excellent.

Don't forget about the gym leaders the MC meets again and gets pregnant again in the tournament.

I hope everything goes smoothly and nothing gets worse.

Will there be more dreams of the legends besides the main legends.

Also I don't know how far the game will get but just wanted to put an idea down just in case. This involves connecting Urshifu to Marshadow and maybe making Urshifu a requirement to even be able to get Marshadow. Marshadow has been learning many martial arts over her long existence and does know about Urshifu's styles so when the MC gets to her and tells her about sex fu she does not believe him until Urshifu comes out that Marshadow gives the MC a chance to show her the power of sex fu.

Found some typos in the newest chapter.

1: Just after Victini pushes the piano down the stairs and choose Climbing gear she says "It's bad enough that you avoided you attack" the second you can be "My".

2: during the fight with Victini and she says "but it will be like an oven for you!" and choosing protect it says "the flames are back enough" the back can be "far enough".

3: Just after putting Victini in her ball for first time it says "You put pack Victini's ball away" can be "You put away Victini's ball and leave".

4: After the questions of Virizion and just as she is surprised by the MC dick it says "your long sleek shaft starts thin and but ends up nice and thick" the word and can be taken out to say "starts thin but ends up".

5: On same page as previous just below when she says "Most of all, you feel like love!" it says "used such a cheesy line, f anything you" the f can be "if".

6: During the Keldeo travel part where it says "You approach the weapon" and choose machete it says "When weapon collapses as soon as" it can be "When the weapon collapses".

7: During Meloetta question #1 she says "I'm no nervous" can be "I'm not nervous".

8: On question #2 of Meloetta she says "You got one right, I'm know you can get another" can say "I know you can get another".

9: for the last question of Meloetta just before the crazy guy goes BOOOOOM! he says "My must my heart's desires" can be "Why must my hearts desires" 

10: During the first down time event with the swords of justice and picking Cobalion Just below when Conalion says " Terrakion, I didn't realize how soft your ass is" Terrakion says "Don't that that Cobi" it can say "Don't say that Cobi".

I agree! We can wait. Fan for LIFE!

I did notice the lake trio had a question with a birthday in January and just wondered if its Chainsaws birthday if it is I know its a little late BUT HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!

Thank you for letting us know. Hopefully you can continue this but if not thank you for making such a great game so far!

Also When going to region 5 the kitchen side scene does not have Regigigas in it even though I got her.

For region 3 only found two typos.

1: Is at very start of chapter with the very first sentence at the end where it says "Maple was right, this place is going to be like a tropical!" the end can use more since it seems to end abruptly and could have "tropical vacation" maybe.

2: After Requaza battle she says "Phew... that pretty heavy" the that can become "that's pretty heavy".

Also found a possible bug maybe its on the ship for the kitchen food scene where the text for Zapdos and Celebi is the same in going to chapter 3 and 4 word for word while the other legends text have changed in some way hers has not. Not sure if that is intentional or not.

Found some typos in region 2.

1: In the first part where the Unknown are first met and the machete is selected the first word below the choice "ou" should be "You use the claws".

2: just after Etei is caught Maple says "I suggest you carful around her" can be "I suggest you be carful around her".

3: Just before going to start Celiby at the first paragraph it says "not much going on in here apart from so Charcoal Cutters" can be "apart from some Charcoal Cutters".

4: In the first journey part for Lugia after choosing surfboard the text just above the link to the next section says "You made yelling scared" can be "You're made yelling scared".

5: Also in Lugia just before the link that says, time for a master ball, Lugia says "I can't go one without you" can be "I can't go on without you".

That is all I've found in region 2.

Excellent Update so far in the first region. I did notice some misspellings. 

First one is when you first get to the choice menu of the region and Maple says "You've already shown me that you're not above dropped a dozen kids into someone" the dropped can be changed to "dropping" to make more sense.

Second is for Articuno at the start just before starting the journey section Maple says "From what I hear, she's are highly intelligent" the are can become "is".

Third is also for Articuno during the journey part where it says "The air is almost unbearably cold now, your breath is freezing in from your face" the from can be "in front of your face"

Fourth is just as the MC is going to put Mew into the master ball for first time it says "You pull and empty master ball" the and can be "You pull a empty master ball"

That is what I've found so far also the pizza dragon was done perfectly!

Has any of the images for the upcoming update turn out better than you expected?

Awesome!

Had an interesting idea for Urshifu that she wants to join the AWC. Since she is not a psychic or ghost type anal is not that effective on her BUT if she is trained in the ways of "SEX FU" she would want to keep training to improve her sex skills and that would include her butt. Lugia would be happy that a legend that is not psychic or ghost type wants to learn more in the "Way of the butt" and join the class. 

If Urshifu does train in "sex fu" she could have both the water and dark type on her since it can be the middle ground of the path of darkness and water. She could like anal more than Darkrai.

It would be funny if one of the future legends THINKS they are a bigger anal whore than Lugia that then gets Lugia to defend her crown with a challenge. The challenge could be that both would shove something MASSIVE in there ass and in a limited amount of time to orgasm the most than the other without fainting! The winner (obviously Lugia) would get a crown that would be in a butt plug.

Also an idea at the end of the game for the AWC would be their GRADUATION from the class and the diplomas would be each their own butt plug.

Also I think Victini would get along with Lugia really well since Lugias passion for anal is so much that its comparable to Victinis love of being #1 and that Lugia wants to use her passion to ignite others passion for anal.

I dont think there is any legend that is a bigger anal lover than Lugia but there are still many more legends to find. Good list.

Had an idea that when the MC is traveling to get Yveltal that he meets a ghost Pokémon that disappears. After Yvetlal has been caught for a downtime event the MC feels a shiver but not on his back but his dick. That same ghost Pokémon is now haunting his dick till she has some fun with him which he is all for. Who are you going to call. Ghost Humpers!

Sound about right and gives time for gen ten and maybe gen 11 to come out if chainsaw still wants to continue this for those gens.

Had an idea for a ship side event involving Giratina and Arceus. Giratina had just done something bad that Arceus will punish her for but the usual punishment is ineffective so she decides to get creative. She decides to punish Giratina by telling an embarrassing story to other legends of when Giratina was young. The story can be that Giratina had been scared of a cute fluffy and small Pokémon (I don't know which to choose) that is completely harmless yet utterly terrifies Giratina that it is the reason she stayed in her dark dimension where the MC found her because it is not there. Giratina tries to act tough and say she was never scared of it but when a legend lies saying that Pokémon is behind her, she jumps like a cat to a loud noise. 

Also had an idea for a side scene of Koraidon and Miraidon when the MC gets them both. They would race each other to determine who the MC will ride on and ends up a tie for the MC to choose the winner. The chosen winner would have the MC ride her to a location that the legend likes. For Koraidon it would be through rough terrain and up cliffs to the top. For Miaion it would be through more developed city area. Both go extremely fast that the MC hangs on for dear life. Once at the destination the legend would say they ran out of fuel and need a top up of the kind the MC makes lots of.

Also a potential idea for their dreams could be for Koraidon be something about being in a race against other prehistoric Pokémon. For Miraidon be she dreams she is the light cycle from TRON.

Had an idea for Zygarde dream. Since she is about balancing life & death she would dream of being an accountant balancing the books (or accounts) of life and death incorporated. 

An alternative idea to Keldeo & Thundurus that is less dark can be the human war was already in progress (not caused by Thundurus) and Thundurus found it annoying so sent a thunderbolt down to stop the Flames of War from consuming the region. The fire was unfortunately near where Keledeo was and resulted in her getting separated from her family but this did force the two human sides to work together and allowed peace talks to happen thus putting an end to the war.

If not thats ok. Could be that Thundarus saw the human war (already in progress) and found it annoying so sent a thunderbolt thinking it would stop the war but it instead started the fire but did help stop the fighting yet did lead to Keldeo being separated from her family. 

Had an idea for Keldeo since she was separated from her family by a forest fire apparently started by a human war but what if Thundurus had started that fire which made the two human sides think the other was attacking and started that war. Thundurus inadvertently caused Keldeo to be separated from her family but does not remember it. Keldeo confronts Thundurus about it to get some kind of closure on her past that if she cant find her family while training around the world at lest have found the one who inadvertently caused it.

For Arceus since she can change her type to any of them could she when its time to have the MC taste her milk to let him try ALL the colors of the milky rainbow since the type could change the flavor. Ex: for the Fire type it can taste like primordial fire with a feeling of warmth and enlightenment. It would be a lot of flavors for him to try!

Question what are the plan for Arceus changing into other types with the plates? She was not in the AWC meeting with Giratina though if she was to go to AWC she would ask Lugia for a private lesson to not embarrass her daughter and make Giratina say something like "kill me now I'm about about to die of embarrassment" after seeing her mother present her but for the class to see. Plus Lugia would love to get her hands on the ass that all other asses are modeled off of. Plus when she can turn dragon type for her massage later on.

Also had a bit too complex but really funny idea of at the end or past gen 7 region when the MC wants to walk around the city/town and all the legends decide to follow him around and all the citizens think its a parade to the legendary Pokémon seeing giants and goddesses walk around following the MC since he will have so many legends caught by then. I know this will be a bit to complex to put in but is a way to show how big his harem has gotten by then.

Another tiny misspell is when Latios is just about to get her massage in the sentence "your fingers gig into her shoulders and she steely demeanor melts like butter" the she before steely demeanor can be changed to "her steely demeanor melts" to make more sense.

Also in the AWC meeting "Uxie and Azelf are a little more retrained" the retrained can be "restrained". 

Another in same event of AWC meeting is "Cresslia practically skips to the from of the room" the from can be "front" of the room. When she is chosen. 

I have seen some small spelling errors in Ch 4.

During Heatran's battle in the sentence "Groudon open her mouth wide and fires back with ehr own burst of molten rock," the open can be "opens" and the ehr to "her". 

Next is during battle with Arceus with the sentence "Arceus's body glows brighter and her huce tits start to bounce as energy builds" the huce can be huge.

Next is after battling Arceus with the sentence "Arceus has a point, you did know up her daughters before meeting her," the know can be "knock" up her daughters that would make more sense.

And last one I found is when the MC visits Rayquaza in her dream when Cresslia says just after the picture of Rayquaza picture "This seems more life it would be your dream" the life would become "like"  to make more sense.

Still an awesome game.

That is correct. A Friendship Paradox.

Had a little complex idea about when Celebi meets Terapagos to be a friendship paradox. When the MC first met Celebi in the second region she at that time has NOT met Terapagos at all in her past since born and does not know about Terapagos existence yet. Now fast forward to when the MC meets and gets Terapagos and either on the ship or a side event while still in that region Celebi now meets Terapagos for her first time BUT Terapagos immediately recognizes Celebi because Terapagos at this time with the MC has already met Celebi in her past. The two of them become best friends for life immediately and Terapagos tells info about herself. 

Up to here Celebi has now met Terapagos and is a best friend to her. Terapagos then can say she knew of a (berry/fruit?) that Celebi, her and the MC would love the taste of but sadly it went extinct a long time ago. Celebi decides to travel back in time to where the fruit was to bring back so her best friend and the MC can try it. When she gets to the past she meets Terapagos BUT Terapagos has not met Celebi before BUT just like in the present they become best friends for life and tells her a little of the MC before leaving to go back to the present. Terapagos forgets about what was said about the MC since its such a long time but she does not forget about her best friend she made thus its why she recognized Celebi immediately  in the present even though Celebi has not met her yet. 

Once Celebi returns to the present they could both have sex with the MC together. A funny bit would then be once Celebi returns Dialga would walk past them and say/think she is not getting involved with those two headaches and since its not causing the world to end or the time line to unravel she is just going to keep walking with her pregnant belly going swaying side to side with each step and enjoy her way overdue vacation. Its a bit complicated but would fit with Terapagos paradoxes.

Also will the Fishing mini game be used in any other regions, not all of them but it is a good design and a good way to meet some of the fish types.

Hope everyone has a Happy New Year!

Another option for  Yveltal breast milk could be to call it white chocolate or white milk chocolate. 

Also an idea for a fish Pokémon for the fishing mini game could be Luvdisc. They can have the nickname "succubus of the sea" since one of their moves are draining kiss, so they would be very skilled at draining males of their cum. A funny bit of info could be that if a luvdisc really likes a male then if that male gets into the water even oceans away the luvdisc will know and very quickly arrive and suck him almost like a shark can detect blood in water from far away.

And to you as well.

Had an idea for Yveltal foe her milk tasting that she has eaten so much chocolate and never gotten tired of it that her milk is brown and also tastes liker dark chocolate and if anyone week was to taste it they would die. Thus death by chocolate or chocolate of death yet the MC is strong enough that he can enjoy it without worry.

Xerneas milk taste would change as the MC drinks it from different soups and drinks to fit with and ends with desert flavor since she has eaten so many diff types of food by then.

That and she would be so rough and forceful that she makes any that get near hear want to just run away from the pain even though there is no chance of death or being permanently hurt only the MC is willing to go through being pounded.

Had a little crazy idea for Xerneas that involves the fountain of youth. She had inadvertently created the legend with her "Fluids" after she masterbated in one spot after so long and not be able to do elsewhere due to Zygarde created the water that is pure life energy. So when the MC meets her and inflates her the water would go from clear to white for obviuse reasons. The fountain of youth then turns into the "Fountain of Fertility" where any female that bathes in the water ends up pregnant with a dozen kids. So when the MC revisits the region at the very end of the game he would see a lot more pregnant Pokémon and/or humans in that region where. Xerneas would love the idea that there would be more giant pregnant bellies in the world with that.

Each time Yveltal would try to pleasure herself she would kill her own mood to do it.

Now that is a perfect kind chaotic for her dream.

And for Yeveltal not only would the boat be a little lower in the water but also less souls would fit in the boat due to her taking more room.

Had a idea for the food Yveltal like and it would be chocolate. She would like it since it can make a person feel a little happy and since she has been hated and feared she would take any kind of feeling of happiness she could get. Now that she is with the MC she now has access to ALOT more chocolate and any food with chocolate. Since it was said that as she gets more life energy she would get plumper, her eating ALOT of chocolate at a time can increase her weight with it. She would also think there is more of here for the MC to love and love it.

Her dream could be that she dreams she is Charon the ferrywoman of the river styx taking souls to the land of the dead. 

For Xerneas food with her being chaotic her food would also be chaotic where it would be weird food combinations she would be craving to have combined like for example: pickles and peanut butter sandwich with wipe cream frosting. 

Her dream could be something like the game "Goat Simulator" that is chaotic with things that make no sense but fits. When the MC goes to see the dream they find Darkrai in the room looking at Xeneas dream and taking notes on how to make dreams more chaotic from her. 

It would be funny if since Yveltal is not as evil as Darkrai thought she would be surprised that she likes the chaotic side of Xerneas even though its a fairy type.

Had an idea for Tornadus, Thundurus and Landorus where a very long time ago the three were like siblings where they would fight each other but not with hate. All three had a crush on Enamorus and wanted to be with her. She had told them to show her their best to be with her BUT they thought that meant that the one who can beat the others can be with her so they fought more and more until they forgot about their crush on Enamorus and why they are even fighting each other so much in the first place. Enamorus still remembers how they mistook her words and when she joins would explain this to the MC. Might need all three of them to get to her.

I could also see Mewtwo getting along with Yveltal since both had felt they should not be loved and had been seen as a weapon so they both kinda understand each other in a way.

Also could Xerneas personality be a little unpredictable. My reason for this is since she represents life and real life is unpredictable at any time with good and bad happening. An example would be one day she would be cuddly and the next she wants to feel the MC under her ass pounding away on him without holding anything back even if it hurts it wont leave damage due to her ability. The one thing that would remain constant would be her absolute love for pregnancies and big belly's and milk heavy tits.