Heh the beginning reminds me of Kung Fu Hustle.
The mix is awesome, the composition is good. I think maybe some of the instrumentation still sounds a little MIDI choppy - and I hear this a lot on professional tracks even so it's not like something a lot of people will necessarily pick up on. I find that the best way around this is to play with a midi controller and be as delicate with the dynamics as you can manage to be.
Ooo, track 2 I really like, it reminds me of this:
Mix wise I think I want more breadth of space. I've been playing around with DearVR Micro (which can be had for free) to position things in space laterally.
For things far away, there should be less delay between the reverb and the sound, and the mix should be wetter. For things closer, the mix should be drier with a longer delay between the sound and the reverb attack.
I've been using a send delay to emulate this lately, and I didn't even do it on my submission.
This is some really stellar work, I hope my feedback helps you take it to that next level of polish. I'm really glad you joined.
Oh, and you DEFINITELY won't want to miss this next OST Jam. I have that theme planned, you're going to have a blast with it.
Phenomenal work, excellently done.