Saw Tomboy candy, knew I had to review.
Really enjoying this game so far! My positive feelings have been said in other people's comments, but I really like the premise and that it's got the same kind of vibe as Big Aspirations. HUGE fan of the candy store, especially the pregnancy candy and the tomboy one. If only there was a way to combine them...
I don't have many criticisms, but I'll put the less "omg horny game amazing" ones below:
- Would be great if characters commented on your appearance with every change made in the Employee Enhancer. Like, regardless of which transformation you take, *someone* in the company has a preference for that type of expansion and might send you a flirty comment if they like it or a sadder one if they're not into it.
- Some kind of archetype choice at the beginning- so as opposed to being a totally blank slate for the player, you could start out as a tomboy, or a goth (pls), etc etc. I understand this woudl be insane to implement but dammit one day I'll find the pregnant goth tomboy of my dreams
- A few QoL changes would be nice, nothing major, but having to spend money to finish a day is a little odd, and it might be goodto have characters stop talking to you for the day if you repeatedly spam their dialogue, which would give players a clue that it's time to move onto another task or day.
- Writing- generally pretty happy with, I'm not looking for Shakespeare when I'm playing a fetish game, but could certainly use some polish and more flowery descriptions when it comes to the more enticing parts. Might be good to have some more vivid descriptions about how characters or the MC feel when they transform (if you're looking for help, I would be happy to provide some writing for you, written plenty of fetish work myself, particularly around growth and transformation!)
- A couple more coworkers! I fully get this is very early days for the development of the game, but it would be lovely to see more people to interact with and flirt with.
My only real negative takeaway was when I went to the hospital after the nurse had had a transformation- really didn't like suddenly having her kids on the screen. Mentioning them is fine, but given this is a fetish game, maybe having her show what she looked like while pregnant would've been better?
Please forgive any spelling mistakes, sometimes I type too fast for my own good.
TL;DR
Love the game so far, keep going, you've got something good here!