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As I say, would be happy to help out in any writing if you're needing a hand!

I can imagine pregnancy is tough to implement in a game, probably why so many have them as an ending only option type thing. Could take inspiration from games like Lilith's Throne and have offspring being taken away to a vague good life away from the MC, or you could maybe do a phantom pregnancy thing, where the MC adn others are "pregnant" with all the symptoms, but aren't actually pregnant for real. Feels like it could fit well with the expansion systems?

Either way, tomboy/goth/preg supremacy.

Saw Tomboy candy, knew I had to review.

Really enjoying this game so far! My positive feelings have been said in other people's comments, but I really like the premise and that it's got the same kind of vibe as Big Aspirations. HUGE fan of the candy store, especially the pregnancy candy and the tomboy one. If only there was a way to combine them...

I don't have many criticisms, but I'll put the less "omg horny game amazing" ones below:

- Would be great if characters commented on your appearance with every change made in the Employee Enhancer. Like, regardless of which transformation you take, *someone* in the company has a preference for that type of expansion and might send you a flirty comment if they like it or a sadder one if they're not into it.

- Some kind of archetype choice at the beginning- so as opposed to being a totally blank slate for the player, you could start out as a tomboy, or a goth (pls), etc etc. I understand this woudl be insane to implement but dammit one day I'll find the pregnant goth tomboy of my dreams

- A few QoL changes would be nice, nothing major, but having to spend money to finish a day is a little odd, and it might be goodto have characters stop talking to you for the day if you repeatedly spam their dialogue, which would give players a clue that it's time to move onto another task or day.

- Writing- generally pretty happy with, I'm not looking for Shakespeare when I'm playing a fetish game, but could certainly use some polish and more flowery descriptions when it comes to the more enticing parts. Might be good to have some more vivid descriptions about how characters or the MC feel when they transform (if you're looking for help, I would be happy to provide some writing for you, written plenty of fetish work myself, particularly around growth and transformation!)

- A couple more coworkers! I fully get this is very early days for the development of the game, but it would be lovely to see more people to interact with and flirt with.

My only real negative takeaway was when I went to the hospital after the nurse had had a transformation- really didn't like suddenly having her kids on the screen. Mentioning them is fine, but given this is a fetish game, maybe having her show what she looked like while pregnant would've been better?

Please forgive any spelling mistakes, sometimes I type too fast for my own good. 

TL;DR

Love the game so far, keep going, you've got something good here!

The style of this game just oozes off the screen, it's a genuinely gorgeous artstyle! I enjoyed the gameplay but didn't really feel there was any pressure as no matter how many times I looped, Roy never seemed to be in harms way, and I found it hard to know what to do in order to progress. Would love to see more of this game, hopefully with more bellies and mechanics in the future! Great stuff :)

There's a great premise here but I could not understand the card game. Didn't make a single good meal for the boss and ended up just closing it down after I got the bad ending.

Yeah this slaps. Fun concept, fun gameplay, especially considering how quickly it was made for the game jam. Really like the Jester's design as well. This is exactly what I needed after playing Neon Heights for the nth time!

Really enjoying this one! The vibes are immaculate, feels like a platformer from years ago. I think the attack is pretty slow, but other than that, I dig it. The visuals are especially good! Hope to see more of this in the future!

The kind words are well earned, seriously! Delighted to hear that you're looking into MC transformation :D I know mpreg and genderbending ain't for everyone, but dammit I love it.

If you ever find yourself in need of an artist who works in Daz Studio, let me know! Would love to help out in any way I can, even though your skills far surpass mine :)

I really, really like this game. Your renders are crisp and incredible to look at, the story, while a little dark for me at points, is intriguing and leaves me wanting more, the gameplay is smooth, and virtually all of these fetishes are right up my alley! 

You've managed to capture a dreamlike quality in a lot of the scenes, which really lends itself to transformation kinks. Super excited to play more of this as you update it. Are you likely to add any transformation options for the player, or will it remain just for the NPCs?

Amazing work here. Seriously, you've got lightning in a bottle.

I’d absolutely love to help in any way I can, if you ever find yourself in need of an artist or writer! I primarily do 3D artwork but would love to try and emulate the style you have for the game should you want a hand!

I think there’s genuine promise here and expanding (lol) the game would be amazing to see. Here’s to more tums! 

Out of all the games from the game jam, this one was definitely my favourite. The art was really fun, I loved the sense of there always being someone swelling up regardless fo the outcome of a fight. The card system was really fun too! Absolutely loved the POV shots when the player is swelling up, and the dialogue from the Witch was brilliant.

Not really much more I can ask for here, except that I hope to see more of your art and games in the future, because I had a really great time with this :D