I liked it good art and good implementation of the theme. Text was a bit long sometimes would have been nice to speed up the typing effect.
One big game breaker though is that at places (for example the second level) i could walk out if the screen to never been seen again. So next time maybe add some invisible walls
Thanks. I got that from another comment too. Don't know how I forgot the walls. I am so sorry that keeps happening to people.
Did you use Shift to autocomplete the line? I know it's not perfect, but I was going crazy with Yarn dialog system spelling out each letter until I figured out how to add that. I had thought of adding a Skip option if players did not want to read the text, but it slipped my mind keeping up with everything else.
Darn. It was supposed to say that in the first line of the game. I must have deleted that line somehow. I'll put it in the game description. This is so frustrating I missed saying that, especially since I had to use Shift in leu of the more intuitive Double Space because my engine can't register it, so I doubt anyone figured it out on their own :(
