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Yo! So I tried your AVN and I was pretty happy with it.

I enjoyed the sense of humor in it and also the quality of the graphics.

The idea of the Portals is fairly unique for an AVN, I have seen similar ideas but nothing exactly like this one. Should be interesting.

On the other hand I think the choices in this AVN leave something to be desired. Mostly It just seems to be a slow build up of affection/relationship points... which I assume will eventually lead to unlocking lewd scenes with a particular girl... But is that all it is? If thats the case then I will be disappointed. 

I hope that you avoid that trap, its an illusion of choice because it doesn't actually change the plot in any way.

I hope to see actual plot changing decisions instead... For example: what if the MC and his friends can change the fate of the worlds they visit but its dependent on what choices you make as a player? Maybe if you choose to save a particular NPC it turns out they can help you save that world? Or contrary-wise they could betray you and doom that world?

Anyways another question I have: Is this a Harem game? Or am I expected to choose just one girl?

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Thanks for your opinion! 

First, the easier question - yes, it's a harem game. You can be with all girls or just with one or remain completely alone. That's your choice.

Second, decisions - 0.3 will introduce the first world where your decision have an impact on its future. In my ideal scenario, what you do across all the worlds will be important by the end. I'm still not sure if I'll be able to achieve that, as the end is quite far off, but that's what I aim for.

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Thats good to hear! Thank you for taking my criticism so gracefully.

Its good to hear it is intended to be Harem but I can opt for just one girl or even none at all.

Just be careful with your dialogue as you go along, I have seen a lot of AVNs include dialogue that assumes the MC is romancing or dating one girl or another or even just having sex with her only to forget to count that the player might have chosen not to do it. 

Many times I have deliberately avoided any and all lewds just to see what the AVN does only to be disappointed by such assumptions.

Anyways, good luck with this. I'll be looking forward to more content in the future.