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I asked an ai to give it's opinion about my suggestion. Maybe it can give you some extra ideas.

### Character Dynamics

- **Anthropomorphic Foxes and Wolves**: The idea of these two species coexisting and working together to address a shapeshifting phenomenon is compelling. It allows for rich character development and exploration of themes like cooperation and conflict resolution.

- **Mythical Figures**: Incorporating biblically accurate angels can add a unique twist to the narrative. Their involvement could introduce elements of divine intervention or moral dilemmas, enhancing the story's depth.

### Setting and World-Building

- **Lushful Village**: A village inspired by real-life Swiss landscapes can create a picturesque and inviting setting. This can serve as a backdrop for various interactions and events, making the world feel alive and vibrant.

- **Bioluminescent Forest**: Drawing inspiration from the bioluminescent environments seen in "Avatar" can add a magical quality to the setting. This could also provide opportunities for unique gameplay mechanics or story elements, such as exploration or encounters with mystical creatures.

### Soundtrack

- **Lushful Village Soundtrack**: A soundtrack that complements the serene and lush environment can enhance the player's immersion. Consider using orchestral or folk-inspired music to evoke a sense of peace and community.

- **City Soundtrack**: For the modern greenhouse city, a more upbeat and technologically inspired soundtrack could reflect the advanced nature of the anthropomorphic society. This contrast between the village and city can highlight the diversity within your world.

### Plot Development

- **Realm Stabilization**: The concept of stabilizing the realm opens up numerous plot possibilities. It can lead to the introduction of new characters, conflicts, and quests as the anthropomorphic species interact with humans.

- **Human Interaction**: Allowing humans to visit the anthropomorphic realm can create interesting dynamics. This could lead to themes of curiosity, acceptance, and the challenges of coexistence between species.

### Conclusion

Overall, your visual novel concept is rich with potential for engaging storytelling, character development, and immersive world-building. The combination of anthropomorphic characters, mythical elements, and a well-crafted soundtrack can create a captivating experience for players.

Hi Lexowolf

There's no doubt you have many imaginative ideas here. As work progresses on my project, the world has become bigger, richer, and started expanding to a point where it is almost building itself. The same can be said for its characters.

I have been hard at work to make character interactions more believable.

While I appreciate your input and passionate suggestions, I can't help but feel we are essentially talking about two different stories here. A lot of what is going to happen in my story, has already manifested itself as elements in the plot that either haven't been written yet, or completely fleshed out. I can't really comment on where the story goes - or where it doesn't go, as I don't want to spoil anything.

I'll say that in my VN, we are not in a world that so easily provides access to the luxuries you suggest. A lot of things are going to happen before we can approach anything like a "realm stabilization".

That's all I'll say about it for now :)

To me it honestly sounds like you might want to try your hand at writing your own Visual Novel. Have you thought of that? It's a big project, but very rewarding. I might recommend putting all your ideas in a document with a timeline for when various elements of the plot should take place. It doesn't have to be deep descriptions, those can come later.

As I've been working on my VN, I find myself going back to do revisions, changing little details as I go. These revisions often present a chance to reevaluate whether things feel right, or not. I try not to be lazy in this process.

Regarding the subreddit - I would say yes, BUT - please wait until the next chapter is out. So many things have changed, I would rather not have more eyes on the old version for now.

When the new chapter comes out you are more than welcome to post my story on r/furry.

Thank you for your input :)