Hi Lexowolf
There's no doubt you have many imaginative ideas here. As work progresses on my project, the world has become bigger, richer, and started expanding to a point where it is almost building itself. The same can be said for its characters.
I have been hard at work to make character interactions more believable.
While I appreciate your input and passionate suggestions, I can't help but feel we are essentially talking about two different stories here. A lot of what is going to happen in my story, has already manifested itself as elements in the plot that either haven't been written yet, or completely fleshed out. I can't really comment on where the story goes - or where it doesn't go, as I don't want to spoil anything.
I'll say that in my VN, we are not in a world that so easily provides access to the luxuries you suggest. A lot of things are going to happen before we can approach anything like a "realm stabilization".
That's all I'll say about it for now :)
To me it honestly sounds like you might want to try your hand at writing your own Visual Novel. Have you thought of that? It's a big project, but very rewarding. I might recommend putting all your ideas in a document with a timeline for when various elements of the plot should take place. It doesn't have to be deep descriptions, those can come later.
As I've been working on my VN, I find myself going back to do revisions, changing little details as I go. These revisions often present a chance to reevaluate whether things feel right, or not. I try not to be lazy in this process.
Regarding the subreddit - I would say yes, BUT - please wait until the next chapter is out. So many things have changed, I would rather not have more eyes on the old version for now.
When the new chapter comes out you are more than welcome to post my story on r/furry.
Thank you for your input :)