Excellent Update so far in the first region. I did notice some misspellings.
First one is when you first get to the choice menu of the region and Maple says "You've already shown me that you're not above dropped a dozen kids into someone" the dropped can be changed to "dropping" to make more sense.
Second is for Articuno at the start just before starting the journey section Maple says "From what I hear, she's are highly intelligent" the are can become "is".
Third is also for Articuno during the journey part where it says "The air is almost unbearably cold now, your breath is freezing in from your face" the from can be "in front of your face"
Fourth is just as the MC is going to put Mew into the master ball for first time it says "You pull and empty master ball" the and can be "You pull a empty master ball"
That is what I've found so far also the pizza dragon was done perfectly!