Good work overall.
Constructive feedback:
I think maybe it falls into the kinds of some of the common things that pop culture does to depict middle eastern music, but I used some of those things myself, using a similar vocal VST in mind.
Heh I only recently watched this video on the topic too:
But I also used a little bit of that kind of thing in my second track I'd say with the female vocalist drawing on that sort of thing. But, it also just sounded correct in my mind to put that vocalist there so I did it anyways!That's kind of a side critique that's more of a stylistic choices of modern composers type of thing, which is ultimately subjective!
I will say this - if you spend time acclimating yourself to Middle Eastern music, it really hits different, and it's really refreshing because they use more notes than the west - microtonal notes between the notes.
Anyways, you still mixed this well and it still sounds good, but I had to go on that tangent! Heh. I'll probably end up doing that with a few other submissions if I had to make a prediction based on theme I picked.
Great work, thank you for submitting! :)