It's a beautiful music piece. You are very clear on what tools to use to achieve the right atmosphere. The ambient came out wonderful! I like the way the sounds are mixed, I like that there is nothing superfluous and yet you can feel the volume and fullness of sound and content.
Cool, thanks for giving such a vivid picture in my head with your music!

Cool composition, makes me having flashback about desert.

This track creates quite an interesting picture....

I see in front of me a small relaxed family, a large Central Asian family that has stopped somewhere in the canyons, living in a portable yurt and just relaxing while the already trained youngsters walk the terrain.... The grandmother, along with her daughter, granddaughter and young son are just paying tribute to tradition - playing a little tune that echoes throughout the neighborhood... At this time, the old man falls asleep to the music of his relatives...

...The camera slowly passes through the shanyrak, flies upwards and stops in a close-up over the whole area....

Cool track! I love it!

Good work overall.

Constructive feedback:

I think maybe it falls into the kinds of some of the common things that pop culture does to depict middle eastern music, but I used some of those things myself, using a similar vocal VST in mind.

Heh I only recently watched this video on the topic too:

That's kind of a side critique that's more of a stylistic choices of modern composers type of thing, which is ultimately subjective!

I will say this - if you spend time acclimating yourself to Middle Eastern music, it really hits different, and it's really refreshing because they use more notes than the west - microtonal notes between the notes.

Anyways, you still mixed this well and it still sounds good, but I had to go on that tangent! Heh. I'll probably end up doing that with a few other submissions if I had to make a prediction based on theme I picked.

Great work, thank you for submitting! :)