There are aspects about this song that I love, and aspects which I like less. I love your quick piano melodies, those sound lovely! However, I seem to have a hard time following some parts. You have a lot of different parts which don't always flow nicely into one another, just as you - I think - put a lot of triplets in your song which confuses me of the rhythm. You likely did this intentionally, as it does fit the concept of 'moments of disaster'. But I would personally still have liked there to be a tad bit more structure, even for a theme like this.
After listening to it some more, I do recognize a structure that I did not recognize at first, so I take some of it back. It is definitely an interesting song, that's for sure, and I like how you try a creative approach. I find it quite fitting for a battle against a mad scientist or something - the uncontrollable and continuously changing music fits that. Cool song :)
Weekly Note Composing Jam #2 » Entries » Moments Before Disaster - submission for Weekly Note Composing Jam 2 for Itch.IO hosted by emscottish January 2025