Brilliant beginning, with its minimalistic and emotional usage of wind and mallets, with slowly appearance of the string synths with the just amount of tension. The sound palette was very interesting, and I loved that kind of vocal synth you used for the bass. As a critique, I would like for the kick in the bridge to have more punch, and maybe automate a bit the choir or layer it with other sounds to make it feel more organic. I liked very much the reprise of the mallets at the end , and in general all the melodic qualities of the piece, moving but not too direct as to not be distracting. And I am going back to listen to the beginning of the track now, because I really think you nailed it. Good job!