Mandolin!!! I want more mandolin! Fantastic piece, perfectly fitting for an RPG, giving a sense of foreboding anticipation and ominous dark ambience. The thing which struck me as having more room for improvement were the repeated drums, needing maybe some work to make them sound more organic, and maybe centering more their panning (but that's maybe my headphones' problem), which were a tad heavy on the left ear because of the repetition. And the mandolin. Not because it was badly recorded, but because I want to hear MORE of it! Good job and welcome to the jam world!