Oh, I understand what you mean now! Yeah, I used the archaic meaning of poignant (as stinky rather than sad). The song is meant to be the pneuma, while the feeling of nothingness, the absence of life, makes the doll feel uncomfortable. I do like melody though, I may change it to that and search a synonym of poignant. The progression from lack to the presence of sound also makes more sense, I'll add it later as well!
Again, thank you so much for the comment! I doubt we'll be able to add a lot more things to the game (we're already continuing with other projects), but I will make sure to upgrade the writing as best as I can for the update we have planned! I'll check out your game too and leave a comment :)
PS: You should try Void Stranger! I think you'd really like it.