Hey There! 

I wanted to try and analyze every game in more detail, but unfortunately :( there's no time left for that, as there's only ONE hour left to vote, and there are still 200-300 games to go. So, my rating will be based on what I can see on the profile page (graphics, concept, description, etc.) to contribute a few points and help improve your chances! I'm not expecting a rating or anything in return since time runs out in an hour. It simply gives me peace of mind knowing that I was able to rate every game. :)

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When I read the intro I surely didn't imagine Threadless being such a cute little thing, so certainly a bit of whiplash going from that mood to little sheep.

I think having 1 HP was detrimental to your game, the bosses didn't have very interesting movesets or dialogue, and the story was very fake deep. It went through all the hoops and did all the tricks, but the routine is so standard I didn't feel I could see you as an author behind it. What are your inspirations?  (was it nier automata) Your choice of words and prose/poetry are well-presented, but pretty hollow.

 "A soft song, its sound feels like velvet amidst poignant nothingness. A sweet whisper of pneuma that flows inside you." 

You crank up that lever to activate her, but the activity of spinning doesn't evoke such a kind, mellow awakening, like her blood is finally flowing through her veins anymore. Hard to imagine a wind-up doll is moving through liquid, not cogs, so the song her reactivation echoes ought to be more jagged than soft. A sound whose touch is akin to fabric in a sad empty space.  You carried it all over the place and there's no image to make, just "difficult" words to nod and go "wow so deep i dont get it," but it's more like it doesn't construct anything, so there isn't anything quite to get. I could force a meaning into it just to say there is one, but it's because I forced this peg into a hole that it isnt shaped like. I think it is an important moment, and a precious thing to try to convey, how does a doll feel when it is winded-up, but adlibbing it with loaded words and calling it a day isn't the dream approach.  

Should i spin it in clockwise or counter clockwise :-) Nice game.

So where to begin, I liked the music of the game, I think it would be good to release a little ost track on youtube so we could listen to it outside the game. The visuals also were great I loved our little girl, I realized quick that the threads and our decision to use them had pretty significant consequences so I found that quite creative. It all fit into the narrative very well and the idea of threads, spinning brings into me like the idea of a loom, of weaving fate and with the multiple endings, I think this is genuinely a game I will replay later to see the other endings and see the other character's stories.

Ps. Some bosses can get pretty difficult, but I mainly felt it so because I ran out of dashes, so I could have timed it a bit better, but maybe having an extra one can keep that tension and pressure of the boss, without reducing his difficulty but making it easier on the player.

Aside that... you can also cheese the bosses, it seems they can be hit even without triggering their dialogue by going past the door, so we can shoot them and kill them slowly, after a certain point their second phase triggers and well they get moving but, yeah a simple bug fix.

Great work! Loved the game.

That was fun to try but I just couldn't beat the first boss... Like I don't play games like this much so I assume its the worst skill issue ever on my part. But from what I could play, its a solid well put together game with a theme that follows the spin idea in an extremely unique way!

Honestly, fun experience, but the tea pot's health is a lot.  I feel like after a set amount of resets the player should be given some pity but that's a personal thing and not objective. Aside from that I loved the sound design, the parry sound sounds a lot like ultrakill's coin which was nice to hear.