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Not really a bug or glitch and not really a big deal, but I wanted to make a small critique as some devs are particular about making sure their grammar is perfect before publishing. You don't capitalize a word after a comma.  All your sentences with commas have the following words capitalized, which should only be the case if the word is 'I' or a name.  Like I said, not a biggy, but just tossing that out there in case you cared. 


I just began playing Chapter 1 and am really enjoying it so far, by the way. I especially like the character designs for the females. Also, I notice you are using my favorite character as your avatar image on here.  ;)

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We'll have   a small brek session once Chapter 3 EP 4 releases , at that time most of the proofreading will be done currently we're just pumping out content as much as we can


And yes Jane is lovely.

she is my fav too, i also like... Rose? well i like jane and whatever the name of the cousin is