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Not really a bug or glitch and not really a big deal, but I wanted to make a small critique as some devs are particular about making sure their grammar is perfect before publishing. You don't capitalize a word after a comma.  All your sentences with commas have the following words capitalized, which should only be the case if the word is 'I' or a name.  Like I said, not a biggy, but just tossing that out there in case you cared. 

I just began playing Chapter 1 and am really enjoying it so far, by the way. I especially like the character designs for the females. Also, I notice you are using my favorite character as your avatar image on here.  ;)

I second the inclusion of somnophilia, but I am pretty certain the dev planned to add it anyway judging by the theme. Though the fact the door that is wide open says it is locked makes me laugh. 

First quest is labeled wrong in the journal. It says "Help with dishes in the EVENING" but should say 'AFTERNOON'. I ended up skipping the time past it and the next day decided to stand in the kitchen passing the time until it popped up in the afternoon.

Nice pick for the song the sis sings. Classic bondage-themed song. ;)

Needs an option menu on the title card. Can't play it like this on my laptop as the entire bottom of the screen gets cut off with no way to fullscreen it. the > arrow, for example, is just a \ upper half. Pretty sure I am only seeing the first few words of dialogue too.

Edit: didn't know the game had sound. The first time I loaded it I had no sound and I had clicked dialogue up to the ticket seller saying she was a cosplayer. Then. when I closed it and r-opened after deciding to post screenshots, the music was blaring at me. So, possible audio glitch where it doesn't work sometimes as well.

Right clicking brings up a Microsoft Print to PDF feature button and no menu, by the way.

OMG! I checked last night for an update before bed and was bummed out. Log on now and see this in my feed! Totally psyched! 

Decent so far, though severely needs balancing issues resolved.  Charity Donations are always the best pick for gaining followers, as it pays out more than anything else, for example. Weddings do not give what they should (I get +6  followers at church fame level 6, despite it saying I should be getting +21 followers, for example), The notoriety deduction at level 1 states it reduces notoriety daily by 5 but it only goes down by 1 every day.

Seconded. For me, it starts off with the chick on the right having brown skin on her face but tan body. Walk toward the front door and game freezes in the hallway every time. 

Looking at the screenshots, the dev quite literally ripped the graphics and map and everything from Mega Man 64 / Mega Man Legend, just reskinning the character models.

Okay, so! Game starts up talking to me like I am a game dev, telling me how to navigate the Unreal Engine's build mode. It also requested to install and monitor dev tools by Epic Games, which I declined. It brings up a menu to set fullscreen and other sliders. I choose continue and it brings up the menu, again, with more dev options under the 'new game' button. I pressed 'new game' and the screen reverted back to the options menu, locking up to the point that even task manager couldn't display on top to close it, forcing me to restart my entire system. 

Don't trust this 'game' one bit. Lots of odd and shady things going on here.

Decent so far. Definitely needs a couple quality of life add-ons. I'd like to see a counter when you find the juice cans so you know how many there are and how many different ones you have come across. I found 3 and am not sure if that is all of them, but a pop-up would be nice. Say there are three total, then a "1/3" when you find the first can for example. The other thing I'd like to see is an option to adjust mouse sensitivity as I prefer mine far more higher than what was given. I hit 'esc' not realizing it is a dump switch to close out the app, thinking it would be the options menu like most games.

Looking at the thumbnails... is that the night club from the VR game Night Club Simulator?

Awesome. Because this is one of my fave games on here, and I'm trying to play it like I feel the MC would for decisions.

Question... starting at the skip-to for the new update... will that not effect the story based on how you chose to play out the important meeting and such? 

As someone who isn't a particular fan of linier H-games, I gotta say I'm impressed. I love this game a lot, and despite the choices feeling too far and few and somewhat meaningless at times, the story s great. The animations for things like showing the dynamic camera movements and people walking are also impressive. Even more so when you factor my new laptop  I am playing on is a business laptop, not a gaming one and has no graphics card. Most games with way worse graphics can't even run beyond 2 FPS for me, but you have full-on animations, slick and sexy graphics, and all running smooth as hell on my lappy! Keep up the great work for everything. I'm not even done with what you have so far as I just picked this up two days ago, but I am absolutely loving it and can't stop playing. Oh, and great charact designs for the females, imho. Nice to see non-exaggerated bodies and chests most others seem to be doing that push me away.

Oh, I wasn't telling you to change it, man. It is your game and your vision; you do it your way.  I was just explaining what he meant and giving my opinion is all. :)

He means making the girls larger and larger like blowing up a balloon. Since you made the breasts so ridiculously large to the point it is laughable rather than attractive, it seems like it would be leading that way. Most who exaggerate the breast sizes that much tend to add inflation to their games. For me, the breast sizes is why I am passing by this game. The story seems interesting and like my type of game since I love corruption, but those breasts... lmao... just way too big.

Okay, not really feeling this game as it is a lot less interactive than I expected, basically being reading with a few images like a picture book. But, either way, two changes I feel you should make to help others: 

First, move the damned text boxes lol. Bottom of the screen, not smack dab in the middle like you have them so you have to click 'hide' just to see anything. Who the hell puts huge-ass text in the very center so it covers everything? lol

Secondly, the character descriptions should be categorized along with the genre they fall under. For example, to choose a daughter I had to click on 'daughters', memorize the names of the possible ones where 'new game' was, then flip through all the character names and descriptions again to read about them. Those descriptions should be under the 'daughters' area. Basically, make it so you click "Pick a story" then choose, "stepmother" or whatever, and THEN have ONLY the stepmothers descriptions show up. Do that with each category so we don't have to play a memory test to pick a story.

Grabbed it from your link because, yeah, same issue. Thank ou for the direct link in the reply! Screenshot attached for proof I'm not lying lol

Edit: *sigh*. Apparently, the dropbox is not working for me either, though it is an issue on their end. Logging in with my google account makes the site lock up on the gsi transformation address.  I'll just wait until you do the next update and grab it then. Thanks for trying.

none of the links work. All itch says is "no compatible file found" and there is no option to open the link in a browser like it does with other developers' apps when it is an external link.

That last part is exactly the issue. I never walked to the kitchen. Why would I have any need to if I am unaware of there being a hunger system and the tutorial thus far only tells me about working at my office and training the slave? You buy the slave, the tutorial says take her home. Then, you talk to your servant who says she can help train the slave but never has a command to do so (and whenever the slave is being trained there is a different NPC doing it in her room and the one we are discussing now is wandering the house at the same time). That same NPC also teaches you about the scribe job and then that is it, at that point, you have a quest to buy five high quality meat and a red wine for her, and then the bottom of the screen says to train and sell your slave. So, the typical player is going to focus on the training of the slave and the acquisition of the meat and wine as nothing says to go explore the house for more tutorials or anything about the food system.

Also, if I'm supposed to get paid 6 or 7 rather than 3 each time I do the scribe job, I wasn't getting it. I got at most 5 and only twice. The rest of the times it was giving me 3.  Be it a glitch or whatever, IDK, but I stand by my statement. I'd take a screenshot, but as I said I uninstalled already. Best of luck on the game, though. Sincerely. The concept seems really good and I hope it goes well for you.

You... you don't make enough money to afford that early on. I'm still in the tutorial with the training of the first female. The scribe job is my only available source of currency at around $3 a job for a total of $12 a day. By your calculations I would require 6 food a day to feed me, the slave, and the starter NPC that says she helps with training. That would cost more than I can make each day to afford the ingredients. Especially considering if I had the ingredients I couldn't afford to waste the time cooking them because I'd not make the money to buy more. On top of that, the very first 'quest' you have us get is one to purchase the most expensive food item. You probably should make a note in the quest to save this for later, as I killed my funds buying one piece because the hunger system is never even mentioned in the tutorial until you get a pop-up that people are starving. You DEFINITELY need to have a mention of the hunger system; preferably even before the purchase of the slave. It would have made me start with a cheaper slave to pool my starter funds better for food.

I'll check back on this game in a few months. Currently, I uninstalled it as it just seems like, in its current state, it will be a stressful nightmare of a highly unfair and unbalanced management game.

2 fish, a red wine, a high quality meat... "Your people are starving." I cook it all for the morning, evening, and night. "Your people are starving."  So, how do you feed them? The game says" have food in inventory", but that is apparently a lie. And even then, you make like 5 coins every time you work as a scribe and the food vanishes faster than you can buy it. I feel like the entire food structure is highly broken and needs to be removed or completely overhauled.

If you hit the text history icon the previously posted text shows up as it should, but you cannot go back into the game or close it. You are forced to close the app and lose progress as no buttons/ keys work, not even the little yellow "back" icon on the upper left of the screen.

PP doesn't seem to work right, or maybe I'm just not understanding how to get it. Completed the game once and the challenge mode #1 with an SS and only had twenty PP to show for it. Considering the cost for an HP upgrade is 100, that seems steep for beating the entire level and still not having the funds to get even one upgrade. Though, in truth, a reduction of multiplier lost when taking damage would be vastly useful to HP max anyhow, since I found myself constantly dying intentionally to try for a different weapon (the icon that upgrades your weapon to a new type doesn't change, so there is no way for me to collect the type I desire. I assume it is supposed to swap through the letter corresponding to the weapon type like in classic R-Type / Gradius style shmups but it always displays an N or H, not sure which it is).

serious balance issues. Bosses seem to be impossible. Even when I increased my max HP by twenty the bosses can attack 3 times and win should they decide to do x17 attack strengths each attack -.- Fought bosses several times and either died or had to use the instawin cheat. Game needs more cards that help you with healing rather than just one that heals for 3 HP when bosses hit for 5-6 times that. 

Also, using instawin cheat on the police officer game breaks you as it removes her from combat but doesn't bring the map back up, so you are locked on an empty screen with the only option being making a new run.

Thank you very much for the detailed response. That was exactly what I was wondering. I was thinking, when it gets a lot of changes I'd like to test the direction it is going in and see if I like it a lot more. As it stands now, it is a good start, but as you said limited. I'm assuming there will be objectives or a shop or something in the full version eventually?

I second all of this. Legit, you said everything I was going to.

To the dev: Will the free version get updates but delayed behind the paid, or is it always going to remain limited and never full?

I'm officially an idiot. lol Thank you. Completely forgot about that button.

Not sure if it is linked to this update or what, but I'm hard locked out of progress, I think. I started playing for my first time a few hours before the game updated. I stopped right when the ring was given to me. Came back to the game updating. got the tutorial for Journeys. My touchpad on my laptop apparently doesn't register when in a Journey, so my spells didn't get chosen. Got into my first tutorial battle and noticed the spells were not there and I couldn't progress, so I left the Journey via the 'exit' button. Chose to make the Journey again and this time used the actual mouse buttons to choose my spells and the game's tutorial for loot and resources in the adventure went on as it should. Entered the gate to finish the journey and the story moved on with Grace asking for 30 magical dust and Audrey telling me to fix the garden and wall. I can't get more magical dust than the two I obtained in that one and only battle the tutorial gave me, because my Journey button brings up an empty menu and when I click UPGRADES it tells me to finish the first adventure, which I assume was the tutorial I already completed.

Meanwhile, I have all the materials required to fix the garden and wall, but none of the NPCs will take them and there are no places on any maps for me to click and use them, so I cannot progress any of my three tasks.

I just started this and I have to say I am laughing at the irony... You took a classic character from one of the most popular video games of all time, introduced her into a hentai game, and somehow managed to have her not exposing her breasts like she does in the game's sprites and concept art. XD

Update: Okay, this game is annoying me. All the mini games keep auto-skipping and giving me rewards and I don't even get a chance to do them, just a screen that says find the girls then a 'Good Work!' and rewards message. Secondly, the days appear too short. There are events that tell me to do things at night like hearts and question marks, but they are never choosable as the day ends whenever I try to make it to them in time and they only appear when no time remains.

Actually, you probably have eaten bamboo and don't realize it. A lot of Asian cuisine has strips of bamboo in it, for example. If you ever order takeout Chinese food or Lao  food and find thin yellow-ish rectangles in the meal, that is bamboo.  Bamboo shoots are very standard.

Man, I just came across this and loved everything I played so far. If you read this, sorry for your loss. I know that feeling. Here's hoping you pick up this project once more and that things are better for you!

PJM was the very first tower defense game that utilized a character you moved around to help with combat. It began on PSP and PS3 and is still getting new games every few years.

Awesome, thank you. The app is really cute and I love the Nintendo DS style pixel art a lot, so I can't wait to be able to actually read things in it.

First off, getting more views may be true, but it can be flagged for it and taken down, so beware. 

My issues with it... first is the 'dash' and 'run' don't actually appear to increase speed, so I can never tell when I did it or not. Secondly, damaging enemies involves using them and backing up then moving forward to do it again, but that is never explained, so I spent a lot of time running into the enemies and their health only going down for the initial impact before I realized what what wrong. Then, I discovered the upgrades icon in the upper right far too late into the game because it is never explained either. On that point, it is so far away from everything that when you are trying to rush between enemies to upgrade or deploy defenses, you can't do it. You just can't. 

As far as I am concerned, the entire game is seriously unbalanced and nothing more than a rage-inducing experience as it is now, rather than being a Pixel Junk Monsters style game like it seems to take inspiration heavily from.

gripes with the gameplay aside... why is it tagged in the "adult" category?

Closing out that odd possible virus-thing, I gave the game a try. English needs a lot of editing. The story currently makes very little sense since the characters act like strangers and the main character is apparently such an pathetic sap that he just follows her blindly into a fake relationship. I'm assuming there will be filler there to show them knowing one another more? 

The minigame needs a tutorial as I have absolutely no clue what he hell I am supposed to be doing or what progress I am making. I climbed both feet and moved around then failed. It needs some kind of indicator or hint system such as a sound.