good use of theme. Having charbyis and Sylla as the ship names was really cool. Loved how you wove the title into the story. It was pretty fun when I finally figured it out. The sister said she served pandemonium is that the same as havoc?
I'm pretty new to OPR, didn't realize there was an equivalent for Chaos as Havoc, so Pandemonium was just what I used. Guess I need to buy the lore books for OPR to brush up on the actual terminology!