Amazing entry.
A couple of things:
- I think you don't need to press "J" for journal, instead you can keep it always open because I didn't see a reason to close it once I've opened it. I would prefer if you have a log for dialogs so you can come back to it.
- When the day ends was a bit unclear that I need to press the button in the top right corner because I was still moving and shooting.
- I think would be great if you let character to move while he is shooting.
Apart of these nitpicks I hope you'll get at least top 10!
Great work!