Concepts & Originality 5/5
This certainly seems like an original and wacky take on the faction.
Flow & Clarity 1/5
The story has a lot of formatting, spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors that make it difficult to read. The narrative itself is also a bit hard to follow, with a lot of exposition that interrupts the action. There are some neat ideas here, it just needs some cleaning up to make them shine.
Adherence to Theme 3/5
The concept of using the planet's gravity as a weapon is creative and interesting. I just wish it played more of a role in the story than only as a pretense/background motive.
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