Very well done. The story was heartfelt and enjoyable and the book was a nice touch. I wish the text showed up a bit faster or there was an option to skip the animation, I almost skipped the story because I get easily annoyed by slow text (but I'm very glad I stuck with it.) The mechanics were really fun and I had a great time playing. You mention not having time to finish the final level at the end but I wish you hadn't, I felt like I had just had a full experience and that just made me consider what was missing rather than enjoying what was there. Overall, very well done, great evolution from round 1.
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Thanks for your kind comment. I will make the “next” button print the full text when pressed once. About the story, the last two lines were always the intended end of the story; I just wanted to give a little but more context on the father-son relationship and some of the struggles kids may go through in an unconventional family (I am from a single-parent household myself). Also, I already had the tech to make objects flow, I just spent too much time on some other stuff and found some last minute bugs.