This has my favorite story so far. Great job on the storyboarding at the beginning, that set the stage perfectly. You built an interesting world. Full marks from me in that category :)
The game was pithy. I think it's impressive that you have this much gameplay in such a short period. Your choice of color, animation, and dynamic audio were stunning.
As for feedback, I found both the combat and platforming more frustrating than fun. I wished I had more space to jump and dash before dying. There were a few instances where I'd die immediately without knowing what I did wrong. I found it hard to tell when enemies were going to attack and because the projectiles moved so quickly it was difficult to dodge, so I ended up kinda mashing the dash button and crossing my fingers.
The low pixel count made it hard to visually distinguish some elements, like what I could land on, what was dangerous, etc.
I don't normally give feedback this thorough, but you've made so much game here that I felt I had a lot to say. You've done a great job and I think this can go places 🤞
