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Fun game concept, and I have two of the treasures already. Thought I would offer some feedback prior to judging (note, treat these as playtesting feedback, I'm not really commenting on the game itself at this stage):

  • I have the raw meatballs, and I feel like I want to cook them in front of the heater. When I type cook meatballs, bake meatballs, warm meatballs - there are no responses. I also tried to cook the meatballs with the hairdryer, but there was no good response to that.
  • It seems every time I leave the kitchen I get the ": failure" sound.
  • Funny message about the bed.
  • In the garage, there is a door blocking the way west, but it should be listed as scenery (going west reports the door, but if it's blocking, better to list it).
  • The handball gives the solution to the puzzle if you drop it in the wrong place. I feel that the clue is not a clue, it's a solution. Please use another message like "STUCK TO YOUR HAND." so it doesn't spoil the good solution.
  • Examining the fork has a spelling mistake in the response to that.
  • Examining the puncher should have a full-stop / period (.) character at the end of the sentence.
  • I have the warm beverages, and I feel like I want to INSERT BEVERAGES (In the same location as the fridge), but it doesn't work.

To be continued ...

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Thank you for this awesome feedback. Some things are small fixes. Others like the door is due to inexperience. The handball thing is a bug, Thank you for the idea on how to fix it. Apart from that it is always nice to know what ppl are trying so I can add sane responses and clues. Finally I should make it more clear that you don’t want to serve meatballs at all 😉 x meatballs and you will see. 

Im sure I can fix this before jam ends. 

EDITED

I believe I have now adressed everything in your feedback! The failure sound in the kitchen was a nasty little bug where  the command was on the wrong side of a bracket :- ). 

The version have been updated on itch.io. I don't have to resubmit to the jam right? 

Best regards!

Michael

The game is updatable before and during the jam (based on previous feedback during the jam). After the judging period starts, the judge will evaluate the current revision that is available at the time of judging, so it makes sense to stabilise before the judging period starts.